Nicely done..
Great movie, the style was almost reminicent on Jhonen Vasquez in a quiet way.
The sound clip at the end took me by surprise and added an extra element to the film. :)
The only thing that went agaisnt it was the blatent use of Flash's library sounds.
They sounded great when flash was first invented, for a few weeks, but now they just hurt peoples heads. A suggestion would be to search around for free wavs, as there's a wealth of sound Fx out there from cartoon "boing" effects to Lightning and Weapons fire.
Seacrh around, or make your own, the 'flash' sounds detract from what would otherwise be a great movie. :(
Cheers
John